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Alessandra
is 9% done
“Bathing chamber” but also “Seriously, figure your shit out kids. We’re in the middle of a war.” Is a little bit of literary whiplash not gonna lie
— Jan 25, 2025 07:28AM
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Alessandra
is 80% done
I’m begging for a synonym for broody/brooding. BEGGING. Please. Crack open a thesaurus. Worrying, agonizing, la ghosting, despondent, sulky- ANYTHING.
— Jan 29, 2025 01:03PM
Alessandra
is 21% done
Maybe I need to revisit the first two books, but the lack of structure is confusing. With no real way to picture the college, the reader just kind of drifts (or is yanked) around the map.
— Jan 27, 2025 11:39AM
Alessandra
is 4% done
Idk violet’s self preservation skills seem a little out of whack
— Jan 25, 2025 06:53AM
