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page 72/518 One more mention of Lily being OCD and that's it, I'm quitting.
— Jun 11, 2016 02:26PM
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Adrian
is on page 78 of 567
page 78/518 okay, right on the heels of yet another typo ("She picked her up small purse and put everything in it. ") was this sentence: "...Lily would be alone with her ODC and her thoughts. " Not only is it ANOTHER mention of her OCD, it wasn't even spelled right!
— Jun 11, 2016 03:04PM
Adrian
is on page 73 of 567
"What was the last time you've seen me on date? " wtf. Did this book not see an editor before becoming available to the public?
— Jun 11, 2016 02:35PM
Adrian
is on page 41 of 567
page 41/518 I don't know that I'm going to be able to finish this book. I'm so sick of hearing how lonely Lily is and how she hasn't been with anyone in so long. Also, I get it, she's a neat freak. No need to tell me multiple times every page. It's beyond redundant now.
— Jun 10, 2016 03:45PM
