P. Kirby’s Reviews > Stone Guardian > Status Update
P. Kirby
is 35% done
Competently written, but not blowing up my skirt. World building is thin and sort of messy. I already want to kick the heroine's dad in the head until he'd dead (horrible, overbearing, misogynist, authoritarian type). The gargoyle is...boring. *Sobs.* How can a gargoyle be boring?
— Jun 07, 2016 01:36PM
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P. Kirby
is 50% done
The best parts feature secondary characters like Fallon, and not the heroine and hero. I'm already skimming most of the h/H chapters.
— Jun 08, 2016 10:50AM
