Danielle’s Reviews > Dark Rise > Status Update
Danielle
is 25% done
Can't differentiate between the POV of Will and Violet or whatever the girl's name is.
— Jan 19, 2025 01:36PM
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Danielle
is 66% done
cults are bad, and so is making your female POVs side characters to the only character you actually care about, Will
— Feb 01, 2025 09:07AM
Danielle
is 43% done
The pacing of this book is such that I still have no idea who these characters are or what drives them, but they're already supposed to be saving the world. I'm befuddled.
— Jan 19, 2025 04:07PM
Danielle
is 21% done
Not enough characterization, just a lot of description and the framework of the plot.
— Jan 19, 2025 11:45AM
Danielle
is 15% done
I'm having trouble caring about these characters - it's all yapping no personality.
— Jan 19, 2025 10:59AM
