Beate’s Reviews > A Wet & Wild Night > Status Update
Beate
is 36% done
"Heck?" Really? You're writing erotica. Use your words. "Hell" or "fuck" is better.
— Dec 14, 2011 07:09AM
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Beate
is 88% done
Wow. 3 fingers up the ass, still sans lube, and she's loving it? Why not just shove the whole bloody fist up there!
— Dec 15, 2011 08:57AM
Beate
is 87% done
Really?? His dick is so "huge" she's one of very few women who can take him all the way in? Not. Even. Likely!!
— Dec 15, 2011 08:56AM
Beate
is 84% done
Making hickies and two fingers up the ass sans lube, is a complete turnoff.
— Dec 15, 2011 08:42AM
Beate
is 82% done
Anal play is fine and all, but just shoving a finger up the ass without any kind of lube is painful, not sexy.
— Dec 15, 2011 08:37AM
Beate
is 82% done
All the POV jumping is making my head spin. There's a POV switch every single paragraph. And all that chuckling going on is nothing but annoying.
— Dec 15, 2011 06:15AM
Beate
is 52% done
The banter isn't all that bantery. More awkward than anything else...
— Dec 15, 2011 12:18AM
Beate
is 36% done
Oh for f......ENOUGH WITH THE BLUSHING! Her name ain't "Bella"!!!
— Dec 14, 2011 07:12AM
