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Brooke
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There was a shocked gasp from Andi.
Andi gasped.
Andi gasped.
Andi had her hand over her mouth as if stifling yet another gasp.
— Jan 07, 2025 06:12PM
Andi gasped.
Andi gasped.
Andi had her hand over her mouth as if stifling yet another gasp.
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Brooke
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"Clearly, I’d watched too many overly dramatic crime dramas in my time." That's an understatement for the main character.
— Jan 11, 2025 05:28PM
Brooke
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"His skin was the color of caramel and there was a slight upward slant to his eyes."
PLEASE STOP DESCRIBING CHARACTERS BY SKIN COLOR/FACIAL FEATURES/HAIR TYPE unless you're doing it for every character -- not the "minority" characters alone. Please. STOP.
— Jan 06, 2025 07:06PM
PLEASE STOP DESCRIBING CHARACTERS BY SKIN COLOR/FACIAL FEATURES/HAIR TYPE unless you're doing it for every character -- not the "minority" characters alone. Please. STOP.

