colleen the convivial curmudgeon’s Reviews > The Night Circus > Status Update
colleen the convivial curmudgeon
is 58% done
I'm generally enjoying it, but there's still something a bit off about the writing style.
— Dec 10, 2011 07:35PM
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colleen the convivial curmudgeon
is 28% done
I'm kinda torn on this. On one hand, I'm finding the concepts interesting, but distant... but it seems like it could come together nicely. But the tense and timelines shifts, and the telling vs showing, are all very jarring.
— Dec 08, 2011 05:54AM
