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Jason Waltz
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Ok, the leaps in connections and actions are getting a little much, the most egregious one just occurring. Deus ex machina much?
— Jan 05, 2025 09:29PM
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Jason Waltz
is on page 132 of 470
Of interest, but not the caliber of storytelling I anticipated. The MC is not all that endearing and I've actually not found a character yet to care about although there are some I'd like to see get their just rewards. The mystery is plausible and promising but the telling of it seems too formalic, the script showing through to much.
— Jan 05, 2025 06:24AM
