Paula Nguyen’s Reviews > The Will of the Many > Status Update

That ending was so insane 😳 I thought I’d never finish this book after winter break but here I am…anyway this was actually pretty good, some of the middle got lost on me but it’s good overall ! I think the characters could feel a little more real, they’re pretty simple and one dimensional :( but the plot moves pretty well and the concept is v interesting

I loveeee a training arc 🥰 it’s not mha or poppy war level but it’ll do

Thoughts so far…
- the concept is interesting but the magic system is just a pyramid scheme so not too original tbh
- mid-level writing that’s corny at times but overall not too corny for a fantasy
- pacing is pretty good ! A+