Suzanne Sinclair’s Reviews > Love and Decay, Episode One > Status Update

Quite enjoying the storyline. Understand why readers find Reagan's "voice" annoying but it does improve. What doesn't is the spelling and grammar, "Haley and I" for "Haley and me", "standing century" for "standing sentry" and - perhaps most egregious - "oozie" for "Uzi". Also, quite a few repeated phrases, apparently not for effect. Proof-reader urgently required.