Jaclyn Yepsen ’s Reviews > When Gracie Met the Grump > Status Update

These internal monologues are giving “meeting that could have been an email” vibes. Why do indie authors always stop trimming down their books after they get popular? 😩 I think we understood that Gracie was anxious and didn’t trust anyone by the 5th repetition. No need to repeat it 500 more times… in the same chapter.