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Lina
is 17% done
Another mistake. Last book the two girl's were called Anna and Melody, now it's Betty and Veronica.
These errors make me sad.
— Apr 13, 2016 08:31AM
These errors make me sad.
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Lina
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Holy sh*t!! What an ending, now I have to read the next one.
— Apr 13, 2016 09:59AM
Lina
is 15% done
There are some small errors that makes this story less tight. I think it was in the first one that Juliette mentioned that a year after she escaped her and Elliot began fooling around for a long time before they finally had sex. But now in the flashback they have sex but it seems like the first time Elliot has allowed anything to happen between them.
— Apr 13, 2016 08:15AM
