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Amii Richards
is on page 317 of 352
"'The Princess of Darkness was becoming sloppy in her attacks. Missing more often and having trouble dodging the ones thrown at her."
An example where the writer over states and then double backed in an attempt to create more detail. The story lacks imagery and complexity. The story line is linear and moves quickly. Likewise, the author uses idioms to convey character development making it seem trite.
— Oct 30, 2024 06:46PM
An example where the writer over states and then double backed in an attempt to create more detail. The story lacks imagery and complexity. The story line is linear and moves quickly. Likewise, the author uses idioms to convey character development making it seem trite.
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Amii Richards
is on page 203 of 352
This book is getting difficult to read through. The characters and plot are not complex. There is nothing engaging or imaginative. The author does more telling rather than showing. I'm not a fan.
— Oct 29, 2024 10:26AM
