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The book needs some editing. Lots of spelling mistakes so far.
Apr 10, 2016 08:01PM
Dark & Broken Souls (Dark Souls #1-2)

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Bizzles1
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Wait, what? They were searching abandoned buildings then suddenly she's back home changing into workout clothes... What happened with the abandoned buildings? I'm guessing nothing was found? That was really odd.
Apr 11, 2016 02:59PM
Dark & Broken Souls (Dark Souls #1-2)


Bizzles1
Bizzles1 is 43% done
If the bar was closed because of the dead guy, & her blood was on the floor from where it had been dropping off of her head, the police would have taken a sample as evidence. They more than likely would have questioned her considering she works at the bar...
Apr 11, 2016 04:29AM
Dark & Broken Souls (Dark Souls #1-2)


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