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It was now time to go to battle a battle Omri and Patrick couldn't see. The soldiers Omri brought to life were showing all the other indians how to fight with their new updated guns. Little Bear was excited to finally be going back to fight this battle. Bright Stars would be staying back so Omri could watch over her.
Sep 26, 2024 07:45AM
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A short and sweet ending Omri and Patrick were sitting with Little Bear and his wife in the dark after he offered them food but he didn't want it. He asked him why he brought him back and since the beginning he told him he wrote a story about him and it was good. He said he was happy about it. He said it would be good even after he was gone. His son would know about him and who he was...
Sep 27, 2024 07:54AM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 183 of 189
A crazy little battle from the men Omri brought to life going against the indians who were trying to invade and steal from Omri and his family this was fun for him he didn't miss the other battle that was going on in Little Bear's time this one was more exciting for him. They tried to steal, but he stopped it with the men he brought to life. They even left all the stuff in front of the house he was glad.
Sep 27, 2024 07:42AM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 177 of 189
A battle is about to happen. Omri did something he told Patrick not to do he was getting the head of this army of men to get ready for a battle by the handfuls. Omri was now seeing these other invader indians in his house life size. Something had to be done. What was about to happen was something he never I'm the beginning would ever do.
Sep 27, 2024 07:25AM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 168 of 189
It seems like now everyone has had an experience in the hidden land of Little Bear's. Patrick had gone and now Omri, but he was there the longest of the 2 boys. He was supposed to come back earlier, but Omri's mom distracted him. It was so crazy as Omri was part of the teepee in some way.Omri actually had so wombs from the battle. It was Patrick who asked if he should bring them all back. Omri didn't care he was done
Sep 26, 2024 01:51PM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 160 of 189
Now, there were indians Omri didn't recognize they were not the ones from Little Bear's tribe of men. These were Algonquins they were Iroquois enemies. They were invading on the land. Omri was seeing it all as he was part of the teepee Boone was also trying to hide as they probably would have killed him already.
Sep 26, 2024 12:59PM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 153 of 189
The boys finally tried the trunk and touched something from Little Bear's time. Both boys were able to go see the village he had come from it was in ruins the battle was worse than they knew. The key was what made the magic happen. They both took turns and saw the world Little Bear came from. They seem to have both been part of the teepee in some way, and they saw Boone life size as they brought him with the teepee.
Sep 26, 2024 08:55AM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 143 of 189
Now it was time to go. The door was now closed, and all the soldiers and the Indians were back where they needed to be in the battle. Boone was left behind to try and care for Bright Stars if she needed help giving birth. Boone gave the boys an idea. He thought, does it have to be the cupboard that brings things to life, or is it the key. Could you use something bigger to see the world they went to.
Sep 26, 2024 08:18AM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 126 of 189
Sticking all these different figures into the cupboard is really causing a lot of craziness to happen. They are trying to decide who would help the Indians fight, except it's not going the way they thought they are all wanting to fight with them. This was not looking like a good idea at the moment.
Sep 25, 2024 10:51PM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 119 of 189
The accident that nearly killed Boone but instead hurt his horse so bad that he had to take him out. Omri's cat Kitsa was responsible for this but so was Omri. Boone was saddened for a bit, but went on to ask Omri for a new horse. Little Bear wanted to go fight but he needed the nurse's approval which he didn't like, but she said he was ok and gave him a shot that she was ok with any future need or theirs.
Sep 25, 2024 12:34PM
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Marco Sanchez  (Dragondarkness30)
Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30) is on page 109 of 189
Omri was getting everything ready. Little Bear had to see all the figures Omri was going to bring to life, but not before Little Bear inspected them to see which ones he wanted to make sure they were not enemies. Omri and Patrick brought everything outside, including the cupboard, and to be safer for a battle. Boone was out in the grass, and Kitsa Omri's cat was after him.
Sep 25, 2024 10:56AM
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