Ruby’s Reviews > Beach Read > Status Update

I don’t know if I like it or not, it’s not really grasping my attention. I’m also bothered by how unsure Emily is with how to characterize the mmc.

He is so unpredictable. The things he does, says and the things that the fmc are saying about him kept changing from paragraph to paragraph.

It’s like Emily can’t decide if the mmc will be brooding and mysterious or if he’s going to be sweet and fluffy.