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P. Kirby
is on page 444 of 464
A good premise and strong female protagonist squandered by inconsistent characterization. The usual "she's tough, but noble" maudlin bullshit. Also, all the secondary characters are flat archetypes. Don't understand the hype around this novel. So glad I'm almost done.
— Mar 20, 2016 02:30PM
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P. Kirby
is on page 442 of 464
Isn't that convenient? Allie's bitchy nemesis gets attacked and killed by a rabid. The point, one supposes is to punish Bitchy for being bitchy, but redeem her as well. Honestly, I don't give a shit.
— Mar 20, 2016 02:28PM
P. Kirby
is on page 441 of 464
And now we have the stupid little kid wanders out and endangers everyone part of the plot. I really don't give a shit and wish the little moron would get eaten.
— Mar 20, 2016 02:27PM
P. Kirby
is on page 440 of 464
Uh, no. If this vampire pocky-clypse happened about a decade before (?), and the cars Allie and Zeke find have been sitting there that long, the gas in their tanks has evaporated and so the siphoning trip is pointless.
— Mar 20, 2016 02:26PM
P. Kirby
is on page 319 of 464
This started so strong, but once Allie leaves the city, she starts shedding IQ points, especially after meeting Zeke.
— Mar 18, 2016 03:24PM
P. Kirby
is on page 217 of 464
Is the bitchy, female rival thing necessary? Ruth, Allie's nemesis, is a walking trope. Meh.
— Mar 17, 2016 12:29PM
P. Kirby
is on page 188 of 464
Really, book? You're going to make the protagonist get all schmopey over the death of rapists? Really?! All you've accomplished is to make a strong female character look like an over-emotional ninny. Ugh.
— Mar 17, 2016 11:30AM
P. Kirby
is on page 20 of 464
These vampires seem to be the standard, needz human blood, no sunlight, powerful variety. Which is fine with me; I'm pretty old-school when it comes to vampires. No sparkle, please.
— Mar 16, 2016 01:24PM
