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Mo
Mo is 4% done
"I watched as the tiny red flakes around his irises danced with mischief as he grinned down at me." WHAT? No, seriously...what? Red flakes? Is he contagious?
Mar 13, 2016 04:51AM
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Mo
Mo is 97% done
Cue shock and surprise at this unexpected development! Or, you know, not.
Mar 13, 2016 03:50PM
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Mo
Mo is 91% done
ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME RIGHT NOW? A character's last name just changed from one line to the next! This author has no friends. How did NOBODY catch this?
Mar 13, 2016 03:15PM
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Mo
Mo is 57% done
It's "lightning", not "lightening". A personal pet peeve.
Mar 13, 2016 12:57PM
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Mo
Mo is 40% done
Councilor? Is she a member of the local City Council? Or is she your COUNSELOR?
Mar 13, 2016 11:36AM
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Mo
Mo is 33% done
Conscience/conscious. Two different things. WHERE ARE THE EDITORS/PROOFREADERS?
Mar 13, 2016 10:28AM
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Mo
Mo is 29% done
Contractions are our friends, people!
Mar 13, 2016 05:47AM
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Mo
Mo is 19% done
Somebody call the comma police.
Mar 13, 2016 05:23AM
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Mo
Mo is starting
Dear God....1% in, and I'm already itching for a red pen. Here we go....
Mar 13, 2016 04:24AM
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