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I’ve noticed from about midway through, the word composition has become rather basic and too hasty. I’d like for it to slow down and give the reader more depth, like the first book did.
— Sep 02, 2024 09:26AM
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Sep 02, 2024 09:39AM
After some reflection, I think I may have been harsh. I’ll keep a more open mind.
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