Dani (Dani Reviews Things)’s Reviews > Demon Princess > Status Update
Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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This start is too rushed. I think a slower pace would have allowed for more world building and stage setting.
— Mar 09, 2016 05:02PM
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Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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Why would he want to help her exactly...?
— Mar 10, 2016 04:33PM
Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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She barely knows this guys, but he buys her things and now "he is the last person [she] want[s] to lie to."
— Mar 10, 2016 04:07PM
Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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What I've got so far: Adriana is a spoiled silly brat, Keldrin is supposed to be Mr. Rich and Perfect, Aldric is stupid and silly as well, and Salvene is Little Miss Perfect royalty.
— Mar 10, 2016 03:06PM
Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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Why is this girl wearing a wedding dress as day attire?
— Mar 10, 2016 01:40PM
Dani (Dani Reviews Things)
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Ok. So. Interesting start... I'm not sure if I like the first person present tense. It's a very indie author thing to do.
— Mar 08, 2016 04:40PM
