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very good so far! i’m enjoying the tone and general vibe and the balance between the fantastical and acknowledging the silliness of some of it, while also being realistic about how things would be? currently feels like i want it to lean more into the symbolic and philosophical deep dive into people’s wants to go back, etc…
— Aug 28, 2024 03:52PM
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Ben White
is on page 37 of 283
enjoying it so far! tone is good and balance between fantasy and “realistic” portrayal of rules for this kind of magic is fun! characters and nice and digestible - currently just wishing it would lean more into the symbolic / philosophical deep dive into people’s wants to go back, etc
— Aug 28, 2024 03:54PM
