Gretchen Fatouros’s Reviews > The Lone Cowboy > Status Update
Gretchen Fatouros
is 35% done
Feels like an early draft. And missing so much punctuation. Not everything makes sense (especially the beginning - really choppy, which didn't help since looking at totally new characters)
— Mar 04, 2016 07:32PM
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Gretchen Fatouros
is 67% done
Looks like finally gonna see how this is part of the series...
— Mar 06, 2016 09:22AM
Gretchen Fatouros
is 39% done
So disappointing! And what is with all the uses of the colon?!?!?
— Mar 05, 2016 03:02PM
Gretchen Fatouros
is 29% done
Writing seems to have picked up a bit, but doesn't feel the same as her other works.
— Mar 04, 2016 07:04PM
Gretchen Fatouros
is 16% done
Disappointed from the beginning. Does read like her other books. Seems sloppy. And already, she uses the name Del & on the 3rd time (same page) spells it Dell!! I wouldn't be reading this if not for the rest of the series.
— Mar 04, 2016 06:21PM
Gretchen Fatouros
is finished
Disappointed from the beginning. Does read like her other books. Seems sloppy. And already, she uses the name Del & on the 3rd time (same page) spells it Dell!! I wouldn't be reading this if not for the rest of the series.
— Mar 04, 2016 06:20PM
