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I all of 2 chapters in & already the racial references are annoying. Just use the characters names! solo & Arleta are having a conversation, then suddenly its “The Human” or “The Elf” or “The Dwarf”.

It feels.like the author really wanted to write a book about racial tension and inter-racial romance, but couldn’t just write a story. They want to make sure you KNOW they are are different creatures.
Aug 17, 2024 04:22PM
A Fellowship of Librarians & Dragons (Adenashire, #2)

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An example:

“I’d love the recipe if you’re willing to share it,” the Human said. “I think they’d make a great special offering at the bakery when Yule rolls around.”

Really? Just use her name. Ugh.
Aug 17, 2024 04:23PM
A Fellowship of Librarians & Dragons (Adenashire, #2)


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