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Eden King
is on page 187 of 320
Blerrrghhhh they weren’t kidding, the middle of this book is dragging. It would be more interesting if the author didn’t dedicate pages, and yes, I mean pages, to boring details like the character thinking about her wound, and mulling over already-established questions. I find myself thinking, “yes, yes, move it along already.”
— Aug 16, 2024 09:44AM
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Eden King
is on page 114 of 320
So far okay. Is the author self-publishing now? Needs a bit of editing. Some of the language/descriptors translate as clunky and there are some sentences I swear my eyes don’t want to read no matter how many times I try to reread them. Getting a bit boring. One last critique: she shoulda Donna Tartted this and skipped to the plot sooner. Personal preference.
— Aug 15, 2024 07:48PM
