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Luen
is 27% done
Story 4: lost
I knew from the first mention of mushrooms this would be an ambergris reference. Only to be delighted at what transpired. I wish it was longer but I understand why it isn’t.
— Aug 13, 2024 06:16PM
I knew from the first mention of mushrooms this would be an ambergris reference. Only to be delighted at what transpired. I wish it was longer but I understand why it isn’t.
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Luen
is 72% done
Story 9: the goat variation
The president of the United States goes to read a story book to children at a school in September of 2001.
9 months previously after his inauguration he was told about the constitutional state secret policy of rounding up and imprisoning psychics in vats to analyse their visions - they all say the same thing - something bad will happen in September.
LOVEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTT
— Dec 23, 2024 10:13PM
The president of the United States goes to read a story book to children at a school in September of 2001.
9 months previously after his inauguration he was told about the constitutional state secret policy of rounding up and imprisoning psychics in vats to analyse their visions - they all say the same thing - something bad will happen in September.
LOVEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTT
Luen
is 60% done
Story 7: shark god vs octopus god
Do I need to say more? Loved it
Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
— Dec 10, 2024 05:06AM
Do I need to say more? Loved it
Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
Luen
is 60% done
Story 7: shark god vs octopus god
Do I need to say more? Loved it
Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
— Dec 10, 2024 05:06AM
Do I need to say more? Loved it
Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
Luen
is 45% done
Story 6: fixing Hanover
Oh I loved this one so much
The twist, the flashback structure
An absolute masterclass in how to use the form of a short story to tell a complete emotional arc for your characters
— Oct 28, 2024 01:47AM
Oh I loved this one so much
The twist, the flashback structure
An absolute masterclass in how to use the form of a short story to tell a complete emotional arc for your characters
Luen
is 39% done
Story 5: The predecessor
First thing I’ve read all month since post absolution depression
I LOVED it - creepy and strange, wonderfully poetic prose
— Sep 29, 2024 03:19PM
First thing I’ve read all month since post absolution depression
I LOVED it - creepy and strange, wonderfully poetic prose
Luen
is 24% done
Story 3: Sonoria
A man hires a PI to find a country that doesn’t exist. The only lead he has is a postage stamp he found in his parents belongings.
Lots of promise, weird and creepy, and then it just ends? Where is the rest of it?
— Aug 11, 2024 12:23AM
A man hires a PI to find a country that doesn’t exist. The only lead he has is a postage stamp he found in his parents belongings.
Lots of promise, weird and creepy, and then it just ends? Where is the rest of it?
Luen
is 19% done
Story 2: Quickening
A weird man gives an orphan living with her neglectful aunt a talking rabbit that insists it’s not a rabbit.
Creepy AF. Loved it.
— Aug 10, 2024 02:11AM
A weird man gives an orphan living with her neglectful aunt a talking rabbit that insists it’s not a rabbit.
Creepy AF. Loved it.
Luen
is 9% done
Story 1: the third bear
Great spooky monster in the woods terrorising a village story.
The monster is a borne reference?! (I already know a later story is so if this is a collection of borne stories I’ll be very happy)
— Aug 08, 2024 10:38PM
Great spooky monster in the woods terrorising a village story.
The monster is a borne reference?! (I already know a later story is so if this is a collection of borne stories I’ll be very happy)

