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Shannon H.
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Good so far, however second chapter is confusing because it goes into a different scene with no warning and I don’t know who the characters are. Unless I missed something, but we go from the new school for Charlie to all of a sudden in some camp with multiple women and they’re being ordered awake to exercise like it’s boot camp. We will see how the rest goes….
— Aug 13, 2024 06:52AM
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Juicyyyyy but the spelling errors are driving me insane
— Aug 18, 2024 09:00AM
Shannon H.
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Well I’ve learned Ally’s mom is either a gold digger or narcissist or both.
— Aug 14, 2024 07:55AM
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Aug 13, 2024 06:55AM
Definitely meant third chapter. But now looking back it’s the main character. So must be a flash back. Could have been transitioned better…
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