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“I’m pushing my cum back inside you where it belongs”

WHAT WHAT WHAT! NO! EVEN MORALLY BLACK DOES IT BETTER.

“I might have fucked you unconscious. But I think you enjoyed it.” Fuck Mason. Ryat Archer does better

I've seen a few dicks in my time, but none of them have been as long and thick and beautiful as his.

I want to kms

“My dick twitches with impatience, but I will the fucker to calm down.” I think that is supposed to say “fuck her” unless that’s how she intended it to be. If so, I’ll make her sit down and revise this

“Looks like Mason Reed and I share the same kink. This is gonna be the naughtiest Christmas I’ve ever had.” Not only I find cringe within this , I am finding spots for revision

“You aren’t stepping on anyone’s anything, Quinn. I’m very single and have been for quite some time.” Interesting...

Nice job 💀

So Quinn complains way too damn much 💀 Also , I think the first chapter could go through revisions. The writing is very amateur especially for an another whom published god knows how many novellas