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“Why bother letting things get serious if they’re just going to end in heartbreak?”
… “That sounds like a lonely way to live, Mark.”
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— Jul 22, 2024 04:27AM
… “That sounds like a lonely way to live, Mark.”
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Hard to tell if it’s intentional because of Arden’s overwrought state, but there are kind of too many adjectives in this opening chapter. It’s a little overwhelming and out of character for analytical Arden — maybe that’s the point, but it feels weird to introduce our main character in a very out-of-character moment.
— Jul 22, 2024 02:37AM
