Kara’s Reviews > The Keeper's Flame > Status Update

no, really, goblet of fire... ummm... and everyone is weird... I don't understand why anyone is acting the way they are... and why didn't she tell everyone what she knows? does she really wanna die and curse everyone with ignorance then death?

there isn't enough internal dialogue, like she is a bundle of nerves with clammy hands, but isn't going over actual ideas or worries... makes her too simple...

who needs sleep? I'm hooked... so maybe she is a bit more wrecked than I realised... wanna bet her magic disappeared either because her heart is broken or gaia is protecting her from something?

five months later... I feel like she'd be left depressed, but maybe two chapters isn't enough to get into all that yet...

borrowing for free, even better reviews than the first... I'm excited