Amy’s Reviews > Miranda in Retrograde > Status Update

Amy
Amy is 45% done
I miss the old LL style. Dual POV. No vaguely triangular shapes.

I’m less than thrilled that at 45% the FMC is asking out the dude who is clearly not the MMC. I AM ALMOST HALFWAY DONE- in a single POV- sell me on Archer not some random guy. Cause right now, Archer “I don’t do relationships and commitment” isn’t doing it for me. At least the banter is bantering like the golden days of LL.
Jul 16, 2024 12:16PM
Miranda in Retrograde

flag

Amy’s Previous Updates

Amy
Amy is 64% done
How am I 64% through and she’s still dating NOT THE MAIN GUY? Why? Especially with single POV- why???

I have zero idea why Archer would fall in love with her and zero idea why she’d fall in love with him because her internal dialogue has him firmly in the friend zone.

I want to cry. Lauren Layne was such a comfort read for me, and I am trying. But this isn’t working for me😭
Jul 16, 2024 01:01PM
Miranda in Retrograde


No comments have been added yet.