Nicolas L’s Reviews > Everlost > Status Update

Allie has used her powers to change the course of the boat and make it come near the ghost ship. She then climbs up the anchor and is captured by pirates. The writer wrote in 3rd person. This is nice because then the story can move around from different perspectives, and the story is better understood overall. However, the author is not always descriptive enough and the writing can seem childish at times.