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What i enjoy the most right now in my story is how strange and mysterious every character is. It almost feels like each person how their own little story to them. It make the story a lot more easier to read since it isn't just boring person after person. What i don't like for right now is how you cant't really tell whats going to happen next. It jumps around to many different things going on and its hard keeping up .
— Feb 04, 2016 07:55AM
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Erick
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So, I just found out that Relly is like the damn human torch! After performing their first gig as Scorpio Bone, which they did amazing, Relly ran off right as they ended. Zee chased his steps and found him in an alley hugging on to a wounded animal. She's wondering why he's even out here and then it happens. She's trying to call the cops and stuff but he says no. And next thing you know, he is covered in flames.
— Feb 18, 2016 07:54AM
Erick
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To be completely honest, I have never witnessed characters like Zee or Relly. They are both just so different from regular kids. They have strange addictions to things that kids wouldn't even think of. They believe in saying that make no sense at all and plus they are in a band that suppose to connect to people on a spiritual level. Other books would have just kids that do kid thing but in this book, they strange man
— Feb 11, 2016 08:14AM
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"Like if scorpions had bones, what would they be? They'd be us." It stands out to me just because its just a weird saying. Usually people compare humans to like monkeys or whatever, but this is comparing us to scorpions. I feel like they have a deeper meaning of this saying but for right now, it just makes me think about what they really mean. This saying means a lot to the plot since its the name of their band kinda
— Jan 28, 2016 07:51AM
Erick
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The main character of this story is Zee. She is a little strange girl that sees the world different compared to people. Also in a way, she is attracted to fire, but not in pyro way, in a more of a I need it way. She feels like she is attached to fire even though she feels deeply scared about what it is. Zee also plays bass and is connected to her guitar Ibanez.
— Jan 21, 2016 07:58AM
