Steven Allen’s Reviews > The Battle for Commitment Planet > Status Update
Steven Allen
is on page 239 of 384
Story is going like I expected, young Helfort has been reunited with his love, and is now fighting with the rebels (hmm, tones of Star Wars?). I am expecting that the young, rescued lady will probably be killed in battle, thus creating a tragic hero who only loved one woman, We'll see how the story plays out but I wonder if this author has not become predictable.
— Jan 21, 2016 08:01PM
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Steven Allen
is on page 162 of 384
Story is going like I expected - the young LT has gone rogue but managed to rescue his honey, despite marooning himself on a hostile planet.
— Jan 20, 2016 02:00PM
