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If you were writing a book where the villain destroys the world, what would the last line be?

(I’m not writing a book, just wanted to see what you guys would do 😊🤗)
Jun 11, 2024 02:30PM

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message 1: by ✪ JY ✪ (new)

✪ JY ✪ (conans version)(Semi-Hiatus) see ya✌️
💅🤪🎀


message 2: by LotheCat! (new)

LotheCat! and that's how the world ended.


message 3: by ✧Bella✧ (new)

✧Bella✧ And maybe I felt a hint of regret, maybe I felt nothing at all, as I stood there and watched it burn.


message 4: by ✧Bella✧ (new)

✧Bella✧ (that's from the villain's perspective, if you couldn't tell. Should I do one from the hero's too?)


message 5: by ✪ JY ✪ (new)

✪ JY ✪ (conans version)(Semi-Hiatus) @Bella omg yess


message 6: by ✧Bella✧ (new)

✧Bella✧ I tried to struggle to my feet, but I knew it was too late. I glanced up at him, standing there, he seemed to be looking at me. I grabbed the pillar beside me, and pulled myself upward, I would die on my feet. And as he watched, as the world melted away and me with it, I could only wonder if this was really it. If he had really won. But he hadn't, because I was still standing. And as long as I died in defiance, I still died in victory. And he couldn't take that away.

(Well, that turned into a full paragraph lol. Too long? It might be better if I took a little more time to edit it. )


message 7: by modeziree. (new)

modeziree. heres mine!
"womp wompppppp"


message 8: by ✧Bella✧ (new)

✧Bella✧ I'm now copying and pasting mine into my writing program, just in case I want to use them later lol.


rhiannon ౨ৎ i just stood there watching the world burn watching the "good guys" die and i didn't care. it was done. everyone and everything was gone. and i still wasn't happy.

(villian's pov)


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

i channeled my inner broadway regina george and watched the world burn.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

jkjk it would probably something like

“maybe they were right, i am insane. but now i watch them go up in flames with the rest of the world.”


rhiannon ౨ৎ ੈ✩ Tessaa ! ! wrote: "i channeled my inner broadway regina george and watched the world burn."

yes ma'am


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

ORRRR it would be
i was a bad girl. i did some bad things, i swear i did it all for fun and it meant nothing…” and so on 💀💀💀


The Library of Claire Louise These crack me up oml


message 15: by Reading Mouse (new)

Reading Mouse Ikr, i might need to do more of these lol


message 16: by evie *s-ia* (new)

evie *s-ia* but since i am an alpha, i had to be skibidi and a sigma, and so destroy the world

/j


message 17: by Reading Mouse (new)

Reading Mouse But damn Bella if you ever write a book I will read it. The heroes pov was so good.


message 18: by ✧Bella✧ (new)

✧Bella✧ Reading Mouse wrote: "But damn Bella if you ever write a book I will read it. The heroes pov was so good."

Thanks.

I'm hoping to publish in the next year or two. (trying not be too ambitious lol). It's now been about a year since I graduated high school, and I've been working a lot on my writing (I even took a self-publishing course, since I decided that's what I want to do), but I've been having a bad writing week or two. This little prompt was so fun tho.


The Library of Claire Louise As I stood alone on the desolate wasteland, the crimson sun sinking below the horizon, I couldn't help but feel a mix of emotions. The initial rush of triumph and dominance had given way to a creeping sense of dread and despair. I had achieved my ultimate goal, but at what cost? The screams, the pleas, the innocent lives extinguished - all now silenced, leaving only an eerie stillness. I thought of all the faces, the people I had once known, loved, and hated, now reduced to nothing but dust and memories. And as the darkness gathered, I realized that my victory was a hollow one, for I was left with nothing but my own remorse and the crushing weight of my loneliness.


message 20: by ✧Bella✧ (last edited Jun 12, 2024 07:15AM) (new)

✧Bella✧ The Library of Claire Louise wrote: "As I stood alone on the desolate wasteland, the crimson sun sinking below the horizon, I couldn't help but feel a mix of emotions. The initial rush of triumph and dominance had given way to a creep..."

Someone else did a paragraph. :) That's good. I'm assuming you like to write?


message 21: by Madissen (new)

Madissen “Well, glad that shit show is over…humanity sucks.”


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