EJ_Renni’s Reviews > A Forest of Vanity and Valour > Status Update

I waited to add this on here because I wasn't sure I'd make it far - I'm still not sure I will make it to the end.

1. The telling, not showing, is strong with this one.
2. There's a few instances of character positioning being forgotten and then they're suddenly in a different spot.
3. The love interest was just killed...and it was meh.