Ashley Nichole’s Reviews > Burning Bridges > Status Update

The author is telling me that Echo is mad & raging but it just doesn't feel honest. I'll continue reading. Maybe things will turn around.

I almost fell off the couch when Ayden said he was 22. I pegged him as a boy, someone in his teens. Definitely not a man. Someone left a rating on a story once complaining that they felt like the author was telling the readers how the characters felt instead writing in such a way that you FELT the emotion the characters were experiencing. I feel this way about the book. I'm not emotionally involved at all.

"She was passionate about everything and always spoke her mind. " He knows this how? From a handful of interactions lasting no longer than roughly 15 minutes and one overnight excursion? I am not feeling the emotion in this book at all. There is absolutely no depth whatsoever and characterization is lacking. IMO.