Taha M. Esmaili’s Reviews > Knightfall > Status Update

I'm reading this again and I'm trying to analyse it more, partly because I need to figure out what exactly about it bugged me so much last time I tried it.
But the more I read, the more I start to fear that the problem is not with the translation as I first thought, but the base writing itself.
Though it most probably is a combination of both, neither was good enough to compromise for the other that's for certain ATM