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If I had the opportunity to interview any character in my book, I would interview Charlie because we hear a lot about her problems since she narrorates the story. I would ask her why she likes Braden, her neighbor who is like a brother to her, and what she misses most about her mom. I think she would say that she doesn't remember her mom because she would get nervous and that she likes Braden's attitude toward her.
Jan 11, 2016 08:24AM
On the Fence (Old Town Shops, #2)

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Lucy Davidov
Lucy Davidov is on page 181 of 295
My novel would be very different if Charlie wasn't the narrator because we wouldn't know how she felt about the makeup that she had to wear to work, her brothers, and her new friends. If Braden was the narrator of the story for the scene where Charlie, Braden, and their friends went to the baseball game, we would hear more about how excited Braden was and how he thought that Evan was treating Charlie badly.
Dec 14, 2015 08:21AM
On the Fence (Old Town Shops, #2)


Lucy Davidov
Lucy Davidov is on page 95 of 295
I think the best part of the book is that the main character, Charlie, has three brothers and that she is into sports. Most books have girls that are into makeup but not Charlie. One of the best parts I have read was when she lied to her boss about her mom being dead. The worst part of the book is that it is kind of confusing. It goes off topic occasionally and I get confused on which brother is which.
Dec 07, 2015 08:20AM
On the Fence (Old Town Shops, #2)


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