Rachel’s Reviews > Down the Wormhole > Status Update
Rachel
is 30% done
This is still quite hard to read. The grammar/spelling mistakes make some things tricky to understand. The story and characters are all "developing" too quickly. Hard to get engaged, unfortunately :/
— Jan 03, 2016 11:41PM
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Rachel
is 9% done
Not too sure how I feel about this so far. It definitely needs proof reading - there's a lot of sentences that don't make much sense, and phrases used in the wrong context. As this is a read-to-review book, I'll keep pushing on...
— Jan 03, 2016 02:35PM
