Brutally Honest’s Reviews > No Mercy > Status Update

“You take the alpha male thing to appalling extremes at times.” --- aka, all the time. lol

"She just wanted to be away from her unbending husband and his total domination of her." --- Okay, I can understand being a bit upset, but to put the blame solely on your husband when there's really no other alternative? Nope, that just reeks of selfishness.

"...much the way a parent might rip a band-aid from a child’s wound..." --- third time's the charm?

"...much like an infant being carted around at the fair by its father." --- that's the second time now that the heroine's size has been referred to as being infantile, which is very disturbing. I get that the guy is huge, but this is not a way to describe it.

“This planet exists within a wormhole which in turn is hosted within a black hole. So you see, my hearts, ‘tis not a black hole in and of itself, but ‘tis the wormhole within it that this planet dwells in.” --- Sounds legit. *cue eye roll* lol. Hard to truly enjoy scifi as an astrophysicist.

Let the raping commence...

"And she had never gone out of her way to remedy the situation—until now." --- This has never made sense to me. Why have sex with an asshole just to get rid of your virginity when a freaking vibrator can do it for you? Why such low self respect for something so inane?