Emma’s Reviews > The Crown and the Collar > Status Update

So far, we are plopped into the story, and we hit the ground running. I'm enjoying Peter's character. He's very kind and giving, which is something Ashen is wonderful at writing.

I am noticing some inconsistencies with content, however. Such as, in ch. 1, the horses are named Abby and Kino, but in ch. 2 they are now *Bess* and Kino 🤔 Also, where is Coleman's Bakery (#5) on the 2nd map?