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Cheng Bogdani
is 66% done
"Junk" - Great idea, would love to see it fleshed out a little more. Read the first few pages of the next story and it looks like they may be related. Again, I'd like to see the MC get built up a bit more so the 'crux' of the story hits a little harder. Four stars.
— Apr 19, 2024 07:51AM
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Cheng Bogdani
is 95% done
"Last Time At Thanksgiving" Ahh, the zombie apocalypse. First person style. The characterization felt all over the place; the narrative was clear, but it had that problem that Stephen King books have - why are we spending so much time on characters that hardly move the story forward? Three stars.
— Apr 20, 2024 11:57AM
Cheng Bogdani
is 89% done
"Temple of Amduscias" I do love a good "oops we stumbled into a gate into Hell story". I'd like to more about the MC's motivations though. Four stars.
— Apr 20, 2024 10:53AM
Cheng Bogdani
is 75% done
"Orificially Compromised" - Interesting premise I bought into, but the supporting world building doesn't really stand up well to scrutiny. Three stars.
— Apr 20, 2024 10:10AM
Cheng Bogdani
is 50% done
"Down There" - I love a good Spirit of the Forest story, and this one delivers. I'd like to see this expanded into an entire novel length story. 5 stars.
— Apr 18, 2024 10:16PM
Cheng Bogdani
is 39% done
"Divine Red" - It's like the myth of Tristan and Isolde, but filtered through a late-stage capitalist post industrial version of Dante's Hell. I felt a little of the The Famous Scene from Blade, too.
I think the story resolved too quickly, I would have liked to see the MC get gl uolt up before the sacrifice.
— Apr 18, 2024 04:04PM
I think the story resolved too quickly, I would have liked to see the MC get gl uolt up before the sacrifice.
Cheng Bogdani
is 31% done
"Threesome" - technically fine, definitely a huge step above some unedited self published Kindle fodder, but ultimately just a predictable rehashed trope. The sex and violence needs to be more specific. Three stars.
— Apr 17, 2024 10:56PM
Cheng Bogdani
is 13% done
Story #1 "The Corpsefucker Blues" is everything I hoped it would be, even the completely unsurprising twist. 5 stars, no notes.
— Apr 16, 2024 10:09PM

