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Cpt Hawk is on page 17 of 282
This protag is giving me hives. Also I sense some sort of parallel role going on in the "homeless person accosts protag on stalled subway train" scene. I just have a bad feeling about this. UGH.
Apr 18, 2024 05:13PM
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Cpt Hawk
Cpt Hawk is on page 30 of 282
how is watching this protagonist succumb more dramatic than the sinking of the titanic. maybe i should consult my therapist lol
Apr 18, 2024 05:53PM
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Cpt Hawk
Cpt Hawk is on page 16 of 282
Oh no, not a delusional pathetic queer protag with aspirations of making someone fall in love with him who clearly has abandonment issues and a nice sandwich of hubris + aspiration + being at least a little pretentious. Also he's lonely and loose ifyaknowwhatImean.

Man .... I like Ludis better still, thank god. Otherwise methinks I'd have to rethink what I'm writing.
Mar 31, 2024 07:14PM
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Cpt Hawk
Cpt Hawk is on page 8 of 282
I'm reading this book at the recommendation of a friend, and at only 8 pages, this feels like the kind of thing that would entitle me to financial compensation LOL. Turned the intro on its head in 8 pages! The slush reader must have loved reading this one. "A post-coitus smile"--yick! Creep!

"If you or a loved one was traumatized by Yes, Daddy, you may be entitled to financial compensation ..."
Mar 21, 2024 03:45AM
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