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Notes:
(1) On one hand, the story's slightly less confusing than usual. On the other hand, the art's noticeably less polished than usual.
(2) If you're planning on having a surprise character reveal, it'd be nice to not just introduce the guy earlier in the same issue.
- That's procrastination.
(3) Next issue's the conclusion. I have no idea what story there is to conclude.
— Mar 25, 2024 11:25PM
Notes:
(1) On one hand, the story's slightly less confusing than usual. On the other hand, the art's noticeably less polished than usual.
(2) If you're planning on having a surprise character reveal, it'd be nice to not just introduce the guy earlier in the same issue.
- That's procrastination.
(3) Next issue's the conclusion. I have no idea what story there is to conclude.
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