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In my book my character was scared because she saw someone she didn't know put when she blinked they were gone

In this book my character has left his monitor off when he left his room then when he got back it was back on. When he went up to the monitor it was on a website. The website said it was fully free. It asked him if he wanted the website to be tame or dangerous, he clicked dangerous. That changed the game completely. It also asked if he wanted his home town or a fantasy world, he clicked fantasy world.

A conflict in my story is he got caught staying up past his bedtime. As a result in that they will have a nice chat in the morning.