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🗣️🗣️Omgosh! And didn't you just say you were already in the water, thinking about your past? Then how are you now, about to step in the shower 🚿, turning the water 💦 on??!!
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— Mar 23, 2024 07:15AM
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👀 Daaaayuuuuum..
It's finally gotten VERY interesting now.. I hope that long awaited prelude, was not just a tease..
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— Mar 25, 2024 06:45AM
It's finally gotten VERY interesting now.. I hope that long awaited prelude, was not just a tease..
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👀 Don't tell me his a&& is living in her apartment building!
— Mar 24, 2024 07:24AM
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Two more freaking continuation errors..
Okay 1. How does Roman know that it was Ryleigh that got him locked up for 2 yrs?? They kept saying the witness that came forth was kept anonymous, and she didn't testify at the trial.
2. We're back to the time span thing of when Roman saved her life. First it was 5yrs ago, then 7 Which put him at age 32 when he went to jail. So 2yrs later makes him 34. How's he 32 now?
— Mar 24, 2024 05:35AM
Okay 1. How does Roman know that it was Ryleigh that got him locked up for 2 yrs?? They kept saying the witness that came forth was kept anonymous, and she didn't testify at the trial.
2. We're back to the time span thing of when Roman saved her life. First it was 5yrs ago, then 7 Which put him at age 32 when he went to jail. So 2yrs later makes him 34. How's he 32 now?
~*~Princess Nya Vasiliev~*~
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Omgosh! ANOTHER BOOK, SAME ANNOYANCE!!
Y'all need some BETA readers badly..
🙄🙄🙄 How are you gonna say at the start of the chapter "5 yrs later" but then, less than a page into the chapter, your character is saying this all occurred 7 yrs ago?????..
— Mar 23, 2024 07:09AM
Y'all need some BETA readers badly..
🙄🙄🙄 How are you gonna say at the start of the chapter "5 yrs later" but then, less than a page into the chapter, your character is saying this all occurred 7 yrs ago?????..
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Mar 23, 2024 10:48AM
See that kinda thing really bugs me!!
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Patricia wrote: "See that kinda thing really bugs me!!"Me too!! Especially now, right after I just read this type of stuff in Riggs..
~*~Princess Nya Cross Vasiliev~*~ wrote: "Patricia wrote: "See that kinda thing really bugs me!!"Me too!! Especially now, right after I just read this type of stuff in Riggs.."
I try to just get past it, I don't like to be negative. I definitely don't have the talent to write a book and try to respect those who do. Once or twice with small details is one thing but not major points of the story or things that are glaringly obvious.
Patricia wrote: " ~*~Princess Nya Cross Vasiliev~*~ wrote: "Patricia wrote: "See that kinda thing really bugs me!!"Me too!! Especially now, right after I just read this type of stuff in Riggs.."
I try to just g..."
Yeah me too.. I get sometimes there are things that are just honest oversights that weren't caught.. it happens... but when it keeps happening over and over again within the same story, and it just totally messes up the plot in throwing you out of things, that's when it really creams my corn.. UGH😤..
Like now, they keep messing up the timeline over his age and hers.. like they couldn't decide if they wanted things to be 5yrs ago or 7yrs ago, so they keep changing how old the H is in the story. I've caught this 4 times now and I'm only 19% in the story..
Yeah dealing with something similar with the book I'm reading right now. Changing the ages of some of the characters, they aren't a big part of the story right now so it shouldn't matter but it really bugs me. Description of the surrounding property, which does matter, ugh. I stopped reading the book because of it
Patricia wrote: "Yeah dealing with something similar with the book I'm reading right now. Changing the ages of some of the characters, they aren't a big part of the story right now so it shouldn't matter but it rea..."😲
