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Paddy Venner
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It’s a good enough story but unnecessarily cluttered with imaginary characters who dialogue with the heroine in her thoughts. I know what they signify etc but they make reading the good story too distracted. Eventually I jumped over the italicised segments of the fantasy dialogues and stuck to the core story which was okay.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:48PM
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Paddy Venner
is on page 150 of 457
It’s a good enough story but unnecessarily cluttered with imaginary characters who dialogue with the heroine in her thoughts. I know what they signify etc but they make reading the good story too distracted. Eventually I jumped over the italicised segments of the fantasy dialogues and stuck to the core story which was okay.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:48PM
Paddy Venner
is on page 150 of 457
It’s a good enough story but unnecessarily cluttered with imaginary characters who dialogue with the heroine in her thoughts. I know what they signify etc but they make reading the good story too distracted. Eventually I jumped over the italicised segments of the fantasy dialogues and stuck to the core story which was okay.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:48PM
Paddy Venner
is on page 150 of 457
It’s a good enough story but unnecessarily cluttered with imaginary characters who dialogue with the heroine in her thoughts. I know what they signify etc but they make reading the good story too distracted. Eventually I jumped over the italicised segments of the fantasy dialogues and stuck to the core story which was okay.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:48PM
Paddy Venner
is on page 150 of 457
It’s a good enough story but unnecessarily cluttered with imaginary characters who dialogue with the heroine in her thoughts. I know what they signify etc but they make reading the good story too distracted. Eventually I jumped over the italicised segments of the fantasy dialogues and stuck to the core story which was okay.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:48PM
