ccfezzi ’s Reviews > Raiders of the Lost Heart > Status Update

Oh okay I get it now LMAOOOOOO

Wait I’m sorry… did he break up w an ex because he surprised her and walked in on her masturbating?? I’m sorry I’m confused???

I’m struggling with the format. It’s 3rd person, but sometimes it’s 3rd person male POV and then switches immediately to 3rd person female POV. I like it better when it’s chapter by chapter. This seems like every paragraph it switches. Hard to keep track of whose mind I’m supposed to be in