Jess (lostinparchment)’s Reviews > The Night Watch > Status Update
Jess (lostinparchment)
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The story is jumping around a little bit and the writing so far has seemed amateurish and almost childish, however the plot and universe is completely winning me over.
— Mar 15, 2024 05:15PM
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Jess (lostinparchment)
is on page 353 of 531
The ending of the second part was definitely unexpected, and made me grow in fondness for this book!
It’s just a shame that I can’t read it in its original language; as its translated from Russian. There are definitely some phrases and the way that sentences are formed don’t always sound right.
— Mar 16, 2024 02:54PM
It’s just a shame that I can’t read it in its original language; as its translated from Russian. There are definitely some phrases and the way that sentences are formed don’t always sound right.
Jess (lostinparchment)
is on page 315 of 531
Although I’m enjoying the world and universe (especially the dark vs light aspect), I’m still finding that the story is jumping around a lot. Things are happening and suddenly you’re getting an explanation as to why this other thing is happening and why this other person is involved… The concept of the story is great but it’s executed very poorly.
— Mar 16, 2024 01:25PM
