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The metaphors and other literary devices are already annoying. "With arms and legs flailing, he fell like Alice in Wonderland plummeting into the rabbit hole." Ugh. "The guilt was haunting, and like a bloodthirsty vampire in pursuit of a juicy neck; he was hell bent on getting something to mask his pain." Oh , Dear Lord.
— May 31, 2015 08:57AM

